peer review

-One important piece of background information portrayed in Act I 0:01

-Catalyst event and start of Act II 1:10

-Another conflict that causes rising action 3:29

-Climax 3:41

-Conclusion 3:47

-Any Crutch 0:02

 

-I like how she used the unique prop and I also liked the love line

 

-I think the storyline is very good and seems like changes are not necessary. I think Jane could edit the videos so that the song and clips match

 

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